What happens when life gets in the way of writing? Or when the story just won't cooperate - do you just chuck it all?
I say no and that's where dry icky words come in...
I never write the end. Because at that point I have been through so
much with my characters that I’m more than a little in love with them.
But it doesn’t always begin like that. There is that point in almost
every story, usually right after that flash of inspiration, when the
characters refuse to cooperate. When they won’t show any dimension
that isn’t flatly glued to the page. There’s that time when I just
want to jump ship and head into another story idea - a new story, a
virgin story where the characters aren’t stuck. And the new
characters, the one’s from the virgin story know that, I’m sure of it,
as they call seductively to me.
But there is a reason to stick with that first story, the one that’s
causing you so much trouble. The reason is that eventually those
characters will wake up, stretch and everything will be all right. I
know so because I’ve been there before. The characters do eventually
come to life but they need a little help. A setting where they’ll be
happy to live in, a plot that they’re excited by, like an avatar they
need a world they can enthusiastically populate. So how do you do that
when the inspiration seems to have shriveled and the muse has packed
her bags and flown away?
First, I think there’s way too much emphasis put on the muse. Wasn’t
that something that inspired badly written poetry in Junior High? The
muse is a gift we get once in awhile but not without a lot of work to
earn it. Writing is a joy but writing is also work because to get to
the joy we have to write and typically the muse is not showing up for
the event. Instead you sit down every day and write words. Words that
might be dry to the point of icky but words that will eventually spark
a direction and more importantly light a fire under that first
character. Of course that raises a few questions.
What makes a character rise from the page and talk back – and in time, hook both the writer and ultimately the reader?
Can it really all start from dry, icky words?
I say--yes it can! Besides what are your other options? Writers
write. So you have to write something. Write words. Force the
story. I know. You can’t force a story. That just makes for bad
literature. But I’ll tell you a secret. Sitting down and writing
despite inspiration will eventually move that story forward. Just
forge ahead, writing one dry, icky word after another, scene sequel if
you will but push forward. Force yourself to sit in that chair, pushing
through the agonizing thought that this story will never live and feel
real passion, that the characters will always be cardboard.
Then one day, you’ll write another dry word, another icky phrase and
something amazing will happen. A character will begin to push up out
of the page and talk back. They’ll tell you want they want and what
you should do and on that day your story will spin on its head and
likely turn in a totally different direction.
That deep well of your experiences both good and bad suddenly offers up
emotions by the bucket and your character latches on. Then another
character and another and soon your story has smoke curling from the
words and the fire behind that smoke has burned every dry and icky word
you wrote to get there.
You’ll know your story is on fire and the muse truly has arrived when
your characters have lived, breathed, cried, screamed and triumphed.
When you’ve wrestled with them over what you consider ridiculous
demands and often lost the battle. When you’ve lost sleep over their
cries in the night as they remind you that they live and while they do
they will make demands. Like babies they demand in voices that exceed
their physical presence and they do so any time through the day or
night.
But you’re over that now. You are exhausted but you’ve forged through
the desert, lived through the cries in the night and fell sweetly in
love just in time for the end.